20-07-2008, 07:33 PM
adikarina Wrote:Hi!
I have attempted my first exam question for module 1 and am attaching the question and answer in the file below.
Please review the answer and provide any feedback back to me.
I will be grateful for any quick replies.
If anyone else has attempted this question, please let me know how you went about it.
Thanks
Kind Regards
Aditi
Sorry for the delay in posting something, I've been away and then unfortunately had a bereavement in the family, all of which does not help you but I don't want you to feel ignored!
I've attached a copy of your paper with comments added.
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A couple of things to note:
a) Like Peter W, I'm not an acceptance expert, but I think my understanding of the term gives me enough scope to comment, although I'll be the first to admit, I probably would not have a go at this question myself!
b) There are lots of true things in your paper, but their relevance to the question is a key thing for you to consider.
c) Your presentation in bullet point is a good idea clearly showing the end of one idea / point and the start of the next.
d) Please don't take the comments as detrimental criticism - most of them are intended to be as questions or thoughts for you to consider your answer against.
Hope this is useful and well done for being ahead of the game and putting your head above the parapet by posting something.
Peter